100 Words on Saturday 2014-5 is back with a bang. 2014 started crazily for us, Write Trib-ers with prompt after prompt. The grey cell is working crazily as the drums beat on our creative minds. Nonetheless, it is a thrilling but joyful experience for us and I’m loving it like the small, innocent waiting to gorge on the king size burger and ice cream at Mc Donald.
I am participating in the prompt 100 Words on Saturday 2014-5: ‘How Do I Tell Her About You’ provided by our dear friend, Corinne Rodrigues of writetribe.com and who blogs at http://everydaygyaan.com. Needless to say, I look forward to the comments that make me want to fall in love again.
How Do I Tell Her About You
How do I tell her? His sister asked, flabbergasted.
He pleaded with folded hands, “I have always loved her. So what if tomorrow she will step in the mandap with our younger brother?’
He lamented, “I am going mad. I don’t want to fight with myself.”
“You don’t need to,” the would-be-bride erupts in the room.
“Tell now. You had the courage to fall in love me and I’m waiting now.”
He bends on his knees, “Sonali, I have always loved you.”
The bride disappeared on marriage day and the groom’s brother was mysteriously missing.
They lived happily ever after.
Vishal Bhidu 
Hehe! nice one! love don’t ever see a reason!
So true, Nibhz and the heart only knows to love. There is no justification neither reason. Thanks:)
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there is only one silver lining of the story- they did not had a fling after marriage, or did not eloped after marriage.
Hope his brother did not loved the unreliable bride 🙂
hehe! Me too!!! They eloped..that’s the bottom line or may be not!!!!
that is not the bottom line in real life, think about the two famillies- do you think the society will ever let them forget? or let them forget very quickly? You do know Indian society, right?
Hey!!! My mom belongs to a very conservative Hindu family and I agree that society will throw tantrum. But, my point is that it is the lives of the people involved and we should not let our lives be dictated by society. Well, this is one way of looking at it. But, respect your perspective in line with Indian society:)
btw, if I was that woman I would have confided into the man I was about to marry next day, in private, and would have asked him to postpone and cancel the marriage later on some pretext, she might not have seen Rosa, should have! they tackled it so smartly-arvind in that movie
Haven’t seen Roja and would love to watch it. Will check it morrow on Roja. I believe love is love and yeah, conversation helps:)
you have missed a really good movie in that case, have you seen bombay? that also is a fantastic movie, so is anjali- i actually love maniratnam movies.
Yeah! I know!! will them up..last time, watched Zakhm and loved it:)
Good they ran before they got married to wrong people, great story.
Thanks Sulekha. After all, it’s about following one’s heart rather than being in an unhappy relationship:)
This is a great story!! How devastated the jilted groom must have felt!! True love conquers all I guess. ♥
I feel sad for the jilted groom but true love conquers all. Once, you fall in love, you should never look back:)
Aww! That was cute! I like such happy endings 🙂
Thank u so much, Pixie. I had two options, selected this one, happy ending:) The other one would have been devastating!
oh! twist and turns in a love tale! nice attempt Vishal.
Thanks a ton, Soumya. Long time, u blessing the blog with such lovely words:)
Great story in 100 words Vishal bit not so happy ending for the younger brother!
Thanks a ton, Aditi..lol! One cannot get everything in life,na::) Poor guy..hehe
mere brother ki dulhan style!! 😛 Nice story!
hehe! Thanks S(t)ri and guess, it happens in real life. hwz bout Sorry Bhai with one of ma fav heroine, Chitraganda Singh:)
interesting twist.. poor groom.. brother and to-be bride.. two heart attacks at a time..!! 😀
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haan!!! Just imagine such a situation..lol..thanks Archana:)
Good for them. Love takes courage. Nice use of the prompt.
Thanks, Poornima. One should take the plunge since it’s all bout their lives and happiness:)
This brought a smile. Glad that they were together and lived happily ever after!!
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Thanks, Shilpa and am happy it made u smile. I am too and hope many souls follow their hearts to live happily:)
hahaha…sorry for the elder one but this was a hilarious take, vishal 🙂
hehe!!! Thanks I know and glad it made you burst out laughing::)
Drama, romance, love, betrayal, this take had it all 🙂 Interesting.
Thanks a ton, Shailaja..love my stories with the expressions of human life and necessary ingredients:)
end time rescue. Well take on situation, Vishal.
Ya!! Indeed! End time rescue and thanks for the lovely words, Neelam:)
very different.but well and gud before wedding it happened 🙂
Thanks. I am too happy that it led to the happy ending before the rescue..haha
This was quite a unique story but at last the true lovers were united. It was finally a happy ending 🙂
Thanks a ton for the kind words, Diana. I am so glad you liked the prompt and the happy ending:)
Drama and romance all rolled into one!
Hey..thanks nabanita..love rolling the drama.
Cheerz
Happy endings! 🙂 🙂
Thanks, Bhavya:)
Glad that they married the ones they loved. Nicely written 🙂
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Thanks Hetal for liking the story. Will hop on ur blog, soon:)
All’s well that ends well…
So…. always listen to your heart; it’s on the left side, but is always right 🙂
Nice post
Bang on! One should always listen to the heart and, ultimately, it will lead to happiness:)
Good!!!
Nice story…
Thank u so much:)
Nice story.. happy endings!:)
Thanks a ton, Payal, once again for the support. Your words touch my heart:)
An interesting twist. but the poor groom – let’s hope he too finds the love of his life
hehe! Haan Suzy! I, too, hope he finds someone he can love. Better to follow one’s heart rather than being compelled to stay in a marriage against one’s will. Thanks:)
oops….:)
hehe:)