Magical love, kissing in the monsoon


This post is written as part of Write Over the Weekend/WOW-Magic, , an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda. Please follow the link, http://blog.blogadda.com/2014/05/23/wow-magic-creative-writing-prompts-weekend-bloggers

This time, I am weaving  a poem, ‘Magical love, kissing in the Monsoon’ and hope you’ll love it.

 

Magical love, kissing in the monsoon

The first time our lips melted and we kissed passionately on the parapet.

You looked at me coyly as our luscious lips melted to seal our destiny with a kiss.

It started raining heavily and we stood in the monsoon, bearing the  fury of the violent weather.

You smiled. It was divine, the most magical feeling that only true lovers can feel and express within.

Remember our magical moments.

The home cooked Chicken Briyani that you made for us as we ate together at the library, holding hands, cuddling and admiring the clock struck six at the magical Rajabhai Tower.

Your smile! The most magical wand ever expressed and how you whispered the three-letter words,

I love You,

the three magical words that makes us feel like stars in the sky.

As I write this letter to you, I can feel the magic of our feelings poured together and weaving magic on our existence.

Love

V

26 thoughts on “Magical love, kissing in the monsoon

    • Thanks ton, Aarya. Well,this time I am not sure to make coz it was done in a jiffy and lack the creative cut. I am sure there are many super awesome posts. Keep reading and Ill try to bring something better and bigger next time to make up for this one:)

    • Thanks tons, Kalpana. I’m so obsessed by Mumbai that all my stories have SoBo as the background that makes love something to die for in maximum city:) Your words means lot to me:)

  1. Maybe written in a jiffy, …but there is oodles of feeling!! beautifully described. lovely 🙂 all the best for the wow!

    • Thank u soo much, Preeti for words of encouragement. I wasn’t sure about this one since I rushed it up but wrote from the heart. Love to imagine the situation and the feeling which I try to express with emotions:)

    • Thanks ton, Damyanti for stopping by. One should cherish each and every moment in life, I feel. Let not such moment fly and become history that we long for. Beautiful moments in life is what we crave for:)

  2. The passion in those lines, makes one certainly long for their loved one 🙂 Brilliant vishal 🙂 If this is how the posts turn out when written in a jiffy, then I cant imagine how much more brilliant the masterpiece will be 😉

    • hehe! Swathi! You are being kind to this otherwise below average prompt, But, thanks ton for encouragement and appreciation. I am absolute in love with ur magic post and how it transported me to a world of dreams and angels:) U shd keep on writing magical, cute and fairy tales..its ur forte, I feel:)

  3. awwwwwwwwwwww really.. now that is a love poem for sure 🙂

    beautiful moments though for sure especially when biryani is involved 🙂 he he he

    all the best and loved it

  4. Lovely.. Rain, library, home cooked food, each of them imbibe a magical quality i believe 🙂 and that adds to the magic of being with our beloved!!

    • Hey! Priya Raj! Ur beautiful words can be felt by the heart which my take failed to so. Magical moments, home cooked briani, rain, joy of sitting at Marine Drive and library is incomplete wo the special one. After all, we need someone to share teh happiness. Thanks for such lovely words:)

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